Monday 23 May 2016

Treasure

It  was  a  windy  and a  cloudy  day. The  old  woman  was  looking  for  things  and  for treasure. The  old  woman  looked  poor, old , dirty, and helpful.
The  old  woman   was   in  a  rubbish  dump with  old  dirty  things.  There  were  lots  of  thing  in  that  place.  


The  old  woman  found  a  Treasure.  It  was a
shining, sparkling, glittering, gold and white  ring.  Then  the  old  woman  went  inside  her  yellow tent.  She  had  no  light  at  all.  It  was  dark  inside  her  tent.  


She  put  the  candle on  the  plate  it  was  shining, yellow, pretty  and  beautiful. She got  the  umbrella  open  then  she  got  out  her  yellow  dirty  mask.  It  was  from  the  dirty  rubbish  dump.  Then  she   got  the  blue  thing  and  two  christmas  trees.  They were green, red  yellow. Then  she  put  the  ring  in  the mask.   Surprisingly  the  light  came  up  just  in  time.  It was  shining yellow.  Then  there  were  dark  dots  on  the  tent but  it  wasn't outside  on  the  tent,  it  was  inside  the  tent.   


Finally she sat  down  on  her  soft,  pretty,  beautiful,  warm  chair.  She  was  like  sleeping. The  old  woman   felt  very  happy, glad, proud and delighted.     

1 comment:

  1. I like that you have lots of wow words in your story.Maya

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