It was a windy and a cloudy day. The old woman was looking for things and for treasure. The old woman looked poor, old , dirty, and helpful.
The old woman was in a rubbish dump with old dirty things. There were lots of thing in that place.
The old woman found a Treasure. It was a
shining, sparkling, glittering, gold and white ring. Then the old woman went inside her yellow tent. She had no light at all. It was dark inside her tent.
She put the candle on the plate it was shining, yellow, pretty and beautiful. She got the umbrella open then she got out her yellow dirty mask. It was from the dirty rubbish dump. Then she got the blue thing and two christmas trees. They were green, red yellow. Then she put the ring in the mask. Surprisingly the light came up just in time. It was shining yellow. Then there were dark dots on the tent but it wasn't outside on the tent, it was inside the tent.
Finally she sat down on her soft, pretty, beautiful, warm chair. She was like sleeping. The old woman felt very happy, glad, proud and delighted.
I like that you have lots of wow words in your story.Maya
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