Ben and his dad had no money. One day his dad said, “Go out and mow the lawn.” An idea popped into Ben’s head. He might make a robot that can cut the grass.
Ben was relaxing. He forgot about the robot. When Ben woke up he thought “Where has my robot had gone?” He thought it was lost.
Finally a stranger found it. She took it to her house. It started to cut the stranger’s grass. All of a sudden the robot disappeared. The stranger called the police. The police went to Ben’s house.
Ben told the truth about what happened. Ben called his dad and his dad came quickly. His dad wasn't happy.
You have done a nice work but work on onomatopoeia. from Ashton
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