Once upon a time there was a boy named Timmy. He had a job that he hated doing. One day he decided to make a robot to do his lawns for him. Slowly he built a robot but he thought it was easy but it wasn't. He spend hours and hours. He couldn’t sleep because he wanted to finish it by the next day. He didn’t even want to sleep for ten minutes. “At last,” he said. “My greatest invention, the robot 2000. It can mow lawns. Just what I needed.”
Excitedly he tried it out and it worked. When his parents told him to mow the lawns he could quickly get his robot 2000. The next day his parents told him to mow the lawns, but the boy complained, “I haven’t even had breakfast!”
Immediately he got his robot 2000. After he got his robot he started the engine. Off it went. Timmy was amazed. It was mowing the lawns like a racing car! Next he was very tired so he went to sleep.
After 1 hour the robot 2000 was completely gone. It wasn’t even in the house. It had disappeared! The next morning he was watching the news. Suddenly the news reporter said, “We have just spotted a robot. It is heading for the Antarctica. If this robot is yours please call 146842.”
“Oh no, my poor robot.” said Timmy! Timmy decided to go to the Antarctica but he had to be quick because they might break it and then I won’t be able to mow the lawns quick.
That’s what he did. He paid $10000 dollars just to get to the Antarctica to find his robot 2000. As he went passed the ocean he saw killer whales and sperm whales.
Finally after 2 or 3 weeks Timmy arrived at the Antarctica. He searched the whole place but it wasn’t there. Next he tried looking in the water. he searched in the water. Finally he found his robot 2000 but it was broken. He said “I spent hours and hours doing this now it is all broken.”
After that he had a idea so he went back home. He took the robot and off he went. After Timmy arrived back at home he had some food. He took all the stuff that he used to build his robot 2000.Then he took everything apart. Suddenly he put all the parts on the normal lawn mower.
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