Once upon a time there was a girl called Rosie. One day she thought that she wanted to make a robot because she knew that in China it is hard to get medicine and there is not as many schools too.
The robot is made to… make a medicine for the different kinds of sicknesses and the other job is to teach the Chinese kids how to write and say words. Oh and I forgot to tell you that the robot can talk different languages like Chinese, Russian, Thai And all sorts. But the best thing is that the robot can do is to... help hospitals make the medicine.
So she made the robot but in 2 years she finished and she tested it out “my robot, it works” said rosie. She was very, very, very, very, very, very happy.
The next morning she was ready “This is the day,” said Rosie. But then she thought how is she going to take this robot to China???
In 1 month she finished her plan to go to China!!! She whispered, “Oky here’s the plan. Step 1 the plan is that I have to save up money to go on a train to go to China. Step 2 next I have to make lots and lots of sandwiches. Step 3 bring the robot with me.”
“Oky guys” said Rosie, “Let’s do it!” said Rosies friends. “Oh I forgot to tell you these are my friends Crystal and Swirl. They are my BFF’s and nothing can break us apart” said Rosie.
But the money that they had made was only 20 dollars and the ticket was for 100 dollars. They did math to figure it out. hey thought 20+___=100 and they thought and thought and thought and they got it, 20+80=100 so they only need 80 more dollars.
But they only get 1 dollar when they do something helpful to do for anyone like mow the lawns, looking after the pets and all sorts of stuff. “But it was harder than I thought it will be” said Rosie, Crystal and Swirl.
No one really wanted them to do those things because there are people doing these things all ready and they looked all over the neighborhood and at last they found just three houses that Rosie, Crystal and Swirl can do each.
But there were old ladies that needed a young person to cut the lawn and do lots of stuff and their reward was $999,987,986.
Finally they finished doing all that stuff and they got the $999,987,986 each. After all that work they were so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so tired.
The next morning Rosie, Crystal and Swirl were ready to go to China. When they got to china they were so excited to explore the country. But they just realised that they can’t talk chinese.hey we're stuck in China.
Luckily, a really nice lady knew that they were from New Zealand. She said, “Hi do you need some help and are you lost?” “ We are okay we just don’t know how to speak Chinese” said Rosie. “ I can teach you,” said the lady. “ You can!” said Rosie, Crystal and Swirl. (Hugging the lady). “ Thank you so much for doing this for us” said everyone.
In 4 years they could speak Chinese and English but their robot was fine . They realised the robot was having to look for some kids to teach. But then this man wacked the robot with a broom because the man thought the robot was a huge fly. Then the robot was broken. “My robot it’s broken” said Rosie. (She said in chinese). She was very,very sad. “What do I do? I know my robot is broken and we can’t fix it.” said Rosie.
The lady said “You can teach the kids how to speak and write” but Rosie said “ No I can’t.” “But yes you can.” said the lady.
In 15 months she did it and she became famous for teaching the children. After that she got a message from the king of China. It said please come to the prison and that's it. So she went to the prison. When she got there she was thrown in the prison. But she didn’t know why???
The prisoners were fighting and one of the prisoners were holding an axe!!! She was really scared. She wished that she wasn't in there but she is so she tried to calm down. She was brave and she talked to the prisoners. She shouted, “STOP!!!!!!!!!” as loud as she could and the prisoners stop fighting. She told them to sit down. When they sat down she told them bible story about god.
After she finished telling the bible story the person opened the door. The man said, “What happened in there?” Rosie said, “I’m fine.” The man was worried that she wasn’t but Rosie had a message to him too.
She said “You need to make the prisoners do some work like make them do knitting and make some clothes and sell them then they get money so they can buy their own food so they won’t fight”.
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