Once upon a time there were 4 best friends.Their names were James, Eldon, Riley, and Michelle. They all loved dancing. One day they went to in the science room. They were playing around and acting very silly because it was their day off. But what they didn’t know was that they were pouring potions together and then they created a evil robot.
One day later one of them accidentally poured one potion in the robot to make them take over the world. They only realised that the robot was a robot at a dance competition. They saw the robot doing things that no other person could ever do. Riley said, “That sort of looks like a robot because it has electric wires coming out of it.”
Riley and her friends went and snuck into his huge beautiful changing room. They hid in the closet. Suddenly the robot came in the room. They all had a sneak peek to see all its electric wires. Unexpectedly the robot said, “Army come here.” After that his whole army of robots came straight away.
Riley went and got some gear from the basement. She got water guns, iphones from the lounge and 4 shields. After a while the robots army came to her backyard. All of them got their water guns out and shot them. They shot them like wild animals. They shot all of them expect for the last one, the leader. He was the hardest to get. So they all split up around the backyard. It was all up to those 4 best friends. They shot the water at him so fast he couldn’t breath. They were crying with joy.
I like how she put capital letters and full stops.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used a fulstop and then used a capital letter.
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