Sunday 27 November 2016

RUNAWAY ROBOT

One day a little boy named Johnny had to mow the lawns. Every weekend he had to mow the lawns if he wanted pocket money. But he was getting tired of doing it because it was getting too long. He thought to himself “What if I make a robot?”

That night he got every thing to use that was old or what his dad and him didn't use anymore. He started putting everything together then he grinded it so it was sharp.

The next morning he woke up and tried it. It worked. He gave him a name.  The name was Jackson. Next the got a chair and a drink and laid down and suddenly he fell asleep.

Soon he woke up. He heard a crowd yelling so he ran up to his house put a jumper on and some shoes and socks and went through the crowd. He was looking for his new robot that he just invented so he really wanted to find it.

After that he found little bolts from the robot. Finally he found the robot. After that he started crying because it was all broken. Soon an idea popped up in his head. What if I upgrade it so the whole thing was made of metal and steel?

So he found some more old stuff and put all of that together but this time he didn't grind it. If anyone tried to break it, they couldn't because it is sharp. It will cut them because it is made out of tin.

Finally he went to sleep and woke up early in the morning. He ran to put some socks, shoes and jacket on and rush to his garage to get it. He put it in the wheeled cart and pushed it to where the grass needed mowing. He pushed the on button and it worked again. Soon he pushed the mowing button and let it rip. This time it didn't get stolen.

When the lawns were done he went to his dad and told him that he had finished mowing the lawns. His dad said, “Good on you son.” Johnny replied but dad, don't I get pocket money?”.

His dad said “Oh yeah, that's right. I'll give you $50.” “Thanks dad.” So Johnny went and spent it on upgrades for his robot then made it even better.

6 comments:

  1. I like how you described your characters feelings.Liam

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  2. I like how I put a question mark when I ask dad something.

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  3. I like your adjectives by Ayden

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  4. You have did a nice work. by Joline

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  5. I like how you used lots of direct speech.Kenneth

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  6. I like your similes by Ayden

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